Showing posts with label Jonas. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Jonas. Show all posts

Sunday, February 23, 2025

A Character's Genealogy: Introduction

I have family members who are super interested in researching the genealogy of our relatives. My sister will sometimes watch "Who Do You Think You Are?" where celebrities track down the roots of their families and find all kinds of interesting revelations. My dad- he's a bit of a skeptic, believing these shows are staged for dramatic effect, companies like Ancestry.com are scams, and logically, you can only trace back your genalogy so far until it's guesswork.

What are my thoughts?
It's kinda interesting, I guess. I'm not super obsessed with my family's history and I'd seen some of these shows (in the event they feature a celebrity I'm particularly interested in).

The funniest part is that I fell into this for one of my characters over a random reason: 
Jonas lives with his guardian and I started brainstorming a way to explain how he had no living relatives to live with after his parents died in a tragic car accident.
Then I started scribbling ideas from what little I remember from Social Studies, bits of my family's history and "It's a Wonderful LIfe" and I wound up with some fun ideas. Although I may have reached a point where I may have to do research to fill in the blanks, should I wish to make proper short stories out of them. 

It's also been fun recently re-reading over my old notes and finding stuff I forgot I'd written.
I remembered the business with "Mr. Potter" and "Mr. Bailey" but little else beyond Jonas's parents meeting in college and Peter facilliating their relationship- hence the godfather/guardianship role he has later on. 

So this is what I'm thinking: 

I'll work over the the next few weeks typing up what I have in my notebook and sharing what I have so far in a series of posts. Then maybe at the end I'll add a question section. Things I'm not sure about from certain time periods, what I could potentially build on and so forth. 
And if that means I'll have to do more research the next time I go to a library, so be it.

Another thing I'll probably have to do is give the people in this family tree names or at least codenames. Because not all of them have that and I can only go so far with monikers like grandfather, brother, and so on. 

Wednesday, January 29, 2025

Naming characters in fiction- intentional or coincidental?

I’m sure all writers have their own methodology when it comes to this particular part of the creative process. They can either pay homage to someone they know or their name means something in another language, which in turn says something about the character themselves or what to expect from their story arc.

For me, 9 times out of 10- I have zero intention behind the names I pick. I just start writing and a name comes to mind that feels good enough to keep.
Phil Collins had been asked in interviews about who Sussido is and his answer was along the lines of “it was a filler word just to complete the phrase until finding something better and nothing came along”.
Sometimes I’ve done the same thing… I start thinking of a character and use a placeholder name until it sticks.

The most recent thing I wrote happens to be one of those rare times I chose the names with intention.
Except for Natalia, all the names of the sirens connected back in some way to something else.
My favorite name of all the ones I picked for the story hands down is Alejandro. Maybe in my top 10 Lady Gaga songs but now it makes me think of a character who went through a lot of changes in the creative process, from a potential villain to an unspoken hero.

The funniest part of this whole process to me— I randomly pick a name because it sounds good and I sort of realize after the fact I might have subconsciously picked it up from somewhere else in pop culture…
One of which i discovered recently and honestly have no explanation for, haha.

My original romantasy story that I wrote in high school- I chose two names intentionally because they reference two of my favorite characters at that time.
Jonas was the main character in The Giver. But I didn’t come up with the name right away. I had someone with dark hair and pale blue eyes- the eyes were inspired by my high school crush at the time. And since the character in the book had those things in common, it felt like a natural fit. Personality wise, both are studious and have to carry a burden on their shoulders but the similarities end there.
Mai, the gossip queen who later becomes a close friend- Mai Valentine from Yu-Gi-Oh! will always come to mind when I write about her. I’ve played around with other names to erase that connection but I don’t know if I ever will.
Nina, Jonas’s future love interest- like with Natalia afterwards, just a name I’ve always liked.

Then there’s their other friends.
Corey and Eric vie to be Mai’s boyfriend and this comes between their friendship… I don’t think I was watching boy meets world at the time but I might have picked those names up from seeing commercials. Their personalities couldn’t be any more different.

Recently I realized with Mai’s friend group- I have Rachel Monica and Bonnie… I might have been watching Friends at the time but I swear I didn’t do it intentionally. This hit me last week and I was like “I can’t believe I did that”… again don’t know if I’ll change the names going forward or not. Their personalities are starting to come together but so far they have nothing in common with Rachel green or Monica geller.
Bonnie is another name I’ve always liked- I have a cousin with that name but I don’t know for sure if I’d met her or not. I also named my second rabbit Bonnie and I had her for 7 years.
(Peter, Jonas’s guardian- another name I’ve liked forever but also I named my first rabbit Peter after the Beatrix potter character… nothing but coincidence there)


So you can kinda see how my mind works… just a series of happy coincidences, but as is the case with all the trivia shows I watch, I can sometimes draw knowledge from the most random places. I'll remember where I got it from a lot of the time, but how I retained it... that'll remain one of life's great mysteries, haha

Tuesday, January 7, 2025

Facing my Fears: Resurrecting "Jonas"

Not sure if this is something I'll post eventually or that I'm just writing for myself, but I'm writing it to get it out of my head... and hopefully I can figure out what to do moving forward.

I'd been toying around with redoing this project again for a while, but it's been really difficult finding the motivation to start it. 
I'd written in previous posts some of my ideas of what to add, subtract and otherwise experiment with... but it's finding the time and energy to do it. 

I'd been cagey in general about writing fiction since I'd finished my previous project. I spent the past several years working on it from start to finish. I've lived with those characters in my head for such a long time and with some of what they went through, it was hard taking on that emotional load. Things I'd never personally experienced but I put myself in the shoes of those who might have. 

So that's played a lot into things. But I think my greatest fear is the same as it's always been: rejection. 

It's all part of this industry. Some of the greater success stories in the writing community had been rejected dozens, if not hundreds of times. I think I have maybe a dozen rejection emails, most of which said they're not interested. Nothing specific that could really help me in the long run. To cap that all off, I was submitting to agents at a time when NOTHING was going right for me. If I got any job interviews at all, there was no follow-up. All but maybe 3 of the dozen of so positions completely ghosted me.
Thankfully things are a lot better than they were back then and I work for a company where I feel valued and I'm lucky enough they've let me continue to work from home even with everything essentially back to normal from whatever the hell this decade has been. 

I spent a few years after the rejection emails trying to edit and fix things, but I stalled out by maybe chapter 4... nothing ever came after that. I got distracted with actual work and the million other little interests I've sunk my time into. 
Now I'm at that point where I really need to start putting words down on my laptop and seeing what happens. I'd been so caught up in my head, thinking over what might work and ultimately deciding some things aren't going to work or just don't feel right.

So this is my message to myself: start experimenting. Write things down. If it doesn't go anywhere, then there's always other options. If it doesn't feel right, I can try a few other angles.
I have a Word.doc for another project where I'd done a similar thing, but for different reasons. Me experimenting with difficulties a character could go through and how the scene around them plays out...

This could be a similar thing and I could use different headings and so on to help organize things. 
I feel like this is already becoming this year's theme and it's only day 7 (going on 8 at this point)... I need to carve out a time slot, give myself 10 minutes and just do the thing. In fact, I'll set up that Word document right now. 

Wednesday, September 20, 2023

Jonas- a character in search/need of a [better] story





Introduction

It’s hard to believe that this was a story I wrote 20 years ago… 

I look back on this story and how I thought I was so sure it was ready to publish. Now I’m kinda glad it wasn’t. Clearly it wasn’t ready. But the line in my head since my last attempt has been- “I’m stuck in rewrites so it’ll finally be ready to try again.”
I got as far as maybe chapter 4 and I’d been stuck ever since.

Recent Difficulties

Nowadays, what’s been stopping me is doubt. The fact I knew nothing about romance (and still don’t) didn’t stop me from writing it in the first place, but in this current atmosphere, if rom-com classics like “sleepless in Seattle” aren’t considered romantic anymore, what is love supposed to look like?

My story takes place in high school and it was from a more innocent time where things like this weren’t constantly questioned. And part of me is terrified my story won’t come off the way I intended it to.

And I thought all I had to worry about were Twilight comparisons- despite the fact I wrote my story from start to finish back in 2003 (I didn't read Twilight until maybe 2007) and it has nothing to do with vampires.

On the Cutting Room Floor

I think back on the various plot lines that make up the story. Many of them I can’t get behind anymore because they’re exaggerated or borrow from every soap opera cliche you can think of.
I didn’t even start watching All My Children until a year after this so I can’t help wondering how I got some of these ideas in the first place.

These “throwaway” ideas include Jonas being thrown off his horse into a frozen pond and he temporarily loses his hearing. Another is where Nina has an accident during a pep rally cheerleader routine and she develops a temporary case of amnesia where Jonas is the only person familiar to her.

These things pad out the story and without them, there’s not much that happens between one major plot point to another.

But I think I can at least salvage the cheerleading accident and do something with it… if anything, concussion protocol could take her off the squad and she gets reacquainted with another hobby she hadn’t done in years. This hobby is an idea I’d been sort of tinkering with to give Nina more of a back story so she’s not just the new girl who later becomes a love interest.

The Necessary "Evils" of Conflict and Character Goals

One writing “rule” I’d read on every writing site: your protagonist HAS to have a goal they’re pursuing and some sort of conflict keeping them from achieving it and that moves the story.

Nothing I've written has anything like this...

Typically what I end with are characters I love spending time with and occasionally something happens involving outside stimuli and they respond to it.

But Twilight got published despite having similar issues. And technically the first Harry Potter book was Harry figuring out life at Hogwarts until finding more about the Philosophers Stone and that mystery propels the story forward. 
So having a character-driven story isn’t necessarily a deal breaker. 

But if I really look into whatever “plot” I have for this story, nothing really concrete happens until the last 20 pages. When the bad guy makes an appearance and Jonas fulfills a destiny that was unfulfilled in a former life.

Inspiration at its Sources

The origin story (which I fleshed out in greater length here https://romantasyland.blogspot.com/2020/10/angels-origin-story-of-jonas-and.html) that started this whole thing- I still vividly remember sitting down to write it after seeing Spirited Away for the first time.
I wanted to write something with a "chosen one", reincarnation, and good vs evil. Plus I wanted to do something with mythological creatures. That all came out in 2 pages and maybe half an hour of typing.

Then what ultimately followed was the kind of story I really wanted to read in that moment- I wanted Haku and Chihiro to meet again and their time together to last forever. 
Jonas has elements of Haku in him that’ll always be there but other than him and Nina possibly having a connection from a former life, there isn't a lot in the story that calls back to that initial spark. 

But as I worked on him in later years, I began to see him more as a reflection of myself. I’d never want the same fantastic destiny that he has. But into him, I poured a lot of insecurities and uncertainties I still deal with in my daily life.

It sounds ridiculous but I’ve always had this dream that I’d meet the perfect person that would magically erase all the things I don’t like about myself. That I’m socially awkward and shy and it’s hard for me to make the first move in a conversation. And my ever present difficulties with making friends.
The strange thing is that I’ve made friends over the years without really having to try. It's just sort of happened. But I don’t know how the hell I ever did it. If I did, I might have avoided a lot of the setbacks I've had in my life... but the devil's advocate would go "no, you'd just make another batch of mistakes altogether."

I think what my biggest issue is- I just had one too many times in elementary school where someone I wanted to be friends with didn't or I had a friend, come next school year, made new friends they liked better and cut me out of their life… so I just stopped making the effort. If I wasn’t going to have a positive result, why even bother?
This has followed me my whole life and it made me feel like there was something wrong with me. Like nobody wanted to give me a chance because of some missing ingredient or there was nothing interesting about me that made friendship worthwhile for them.
I could go into future detail about why I didn’t like recess or hated working on group projects but I think I've made my point. Wouldn’t want to bore anyone else still here reading this.

Jonas has a little more that’s abnormal about him than I do. 
On my own time, I’d sketched out how he’d had seizures as a kid and his last one was after he survived the same car accident that killed his parents. 
In the place of them came mind-reading abilities (physical contact is required) and telekinetic powers (it's essentially a defense mechanism but under extreme stress, he'll create a barrier of protection around himself).
I still have a lot of things to figure out but those are the basics. He isolates himself because he doesn’t want to hurt anyone or at least people to think he’s a freak. He doesn't know why he has these powers and the latter of the two, he doesn't know how to control it when it arises.

What IS the Story here?

In terms of story, this is all I have so far that’s going to stick

  • Nina moves to a new house and new school
  • There’s a thunderstorm where she hears some unexplained phenomena, including a voice that's familiar to her
  • The meet cute with her and Jonas
  • The early seeds of friendship are sown between the two of them, involving meeting his horses and iguanas
  • One of the horses has a foal and Nina finds out that Jonas has been struck by lightning several times in his life- explaining his rumored periodic absences 
  • The pep rally cheerleading accident
  • The love triangle arc where two guys vie to be the head cheerleader's boyfriend
  • The loser of the love triangle picks a fight with the winner and Jonas gets involved and his powers resurface
  • Christmas- Nina finds out what happened to Jonas’s parents and why he still blames himself for what happened
  • The antagonist finally makes an appearance
  • The school dance
  • The showdown between good and evil
  • The aftermath of the duel

The story in its current form barely clocks over a hundred pages so I’ll have to figure out a lot of things to add padding.

Conclusion and Upcoming Ideas

Yeah, I get to the end of this and I’m thinking “I was worried for nothing. This is doable.”
But there are still a lot of incidentals I need to work out.

Among them: I need to find some part of balance about Jonas’s level of confidence. Because I feel like it flucuates a lot.

I’d done a lot of brainstorming over the last couple years, but not much that’ll make the final product. Some, I’m very excited to share on this blog and plan to soon.

Sunday, August 6, 2023

Devil's Advocate- Why "Te Busque" may be doomed to fail...

This might apply to almost everything I've written, unfortunately.

I've been thinking about this for a while.
In the current P.C. culture we've been dealing with for the last several years, I can't help but feel that the world of Calypso would sooner be cancelled than make any sort of positive impact.

Although it deals with some controversial subjects like prostitution and there's a handful of sex scenes in it, there are other things that people could consider fatal flaws.

Red flag #1: Cultural misapproriation 

-the setting of Calypso is purely fictional but I picture it as an island in the Carribean that thrives on tourism. Many of the characters have Latin names, few of which actually have accents.

Considering nowadays where there's a lot of emphasis on diversity and people being true to their cultures, some people might not like the fact I'm writing about people from a background I don't belong to. And certainly not one I'm particularly knowledgable about. 
Like with a lot of things I write, I get an idea and I run with it and having this cast of character just felt right at the time.

Red flag #2: Stalker Alert and "No means No"

- Through the first part of the story, Juan Paulo runs into Talia a few times. She repeatedly turns him down and tries to explain she has no romantic interest in him. But in the end, he wears her down and she finally gives him the time of day

Technically, there's only one instance in the story that could be construed as stalking. After meeting the first time, JP winds up meeting with Talia again through his friend, Javier, who is beginning a relationship with Scarlet. Following this, he brings flowers to her workplace and says he'll come by to see her next show.
But the fact she turns him down multiple times and he doesn't seem to get the hint could be problematic for some people... the fact he's a nice guy might not make this completely ok. 

...the whole "no means no" thing is something I've taken issue with in a few movies, if I'm being completely honest. 

But the whole stalking thing... not only have a lot of my favorite romantic movies apparently involved stalking by today's standards, but the confusion is making me rethink a lot of my writing.

A high school couple I first wrote about 20 years ago- Jonas and Nina- he suffers from social anxiety and for other reasons, has kept away from people for most of his life. She's the new girl at his school and something about her makes him want to break down the walls he's put around himself. But he's not entirely sure how.
And I'm not entirely sure how to go about it without it making it seem like he's a stalker or he's coming on far too strong. 
The confusion is so bad- it's like I'm rethinking my entire life and everything I knew.

Red Flag #3- lack of diversity

If I was lucky enough to have this published and turned into a movie, I still imagine the cast being almost all white. Obviously, Talia and Alejandro would be played actors with distinct Spanish accents. And a handful of other characters.
If any of the characters was black, it'd probably be Amber. She'd be the easiest one to imagine being Afro-Latina.

There's also the question of queer representation. Any of the Calypso girls being lesbians wouldn't work in the grand scheme of things. 
The one exception to this, again, would probably be Amber. She geninuely cares about Scarlet and misses the days when they were best friends. The way she acts toward her when they finally get to spend time together could be construed as her having feelings for her. Despite the fact Amber's one goal is to get Alejandro to notice her, part of me could imagine Amber and Scarlet being a thing. Or Amber having a one-sided crush on her. 
I also considered the possibility of Ruby not being entirely straight. I gave romantic plot lines to several of the other girls but nothing ever came to mind for her. I wrote one line where she says Amber's an amazing dancer and she'd love to work with her. Maybe deep down she's harboring other feelings for her... I really don't know at this point. 

My reality is 99% white so I don't see a lot of diversity with my fiction anyway.
But my stance about this has the following: I'm all for diversity but it shouldn't be forced just for the sake of it. It has to make sense in the context of the story. 
I can't help the fact I wasn't around a diverse group of people growing up. I'm not going to change the outlook of what I write just to satisfy the masses. Would I object to some of my characters coming from different backgrounds? That ultimately depends on whether I have a vivid picture of them in my mind when I created them. 

***

As of writing this, I'd read through my story from start to finish. There's a couple of sections I highlighted that need to be tweaked, fixed or connected to other parts of the story.
Then there's the ending... the final frame is perfect for the story I'm telling, but something about the last few chapters isn't quite as satsifying as I'd hoped. Maybe because things got especially dark and the ultimate bad guy in the story gets a heavy dose of karma thrown back at him... I'm not sure how the readers will take it, but even though it's a happy ending for everyone, I can't help but feel a little depressed about it. Maybe I'm just sad about the fact it's ending but I'm also kinda afraid that the end feels like a completely different story from the many chapters that went before it. 

Thursday, October 29, 2020

ANGELS: The origin story of Jonas and the elemental angels

I hadn't posted on this blog in 4 years, so my return has been a long time coming...

Back in 2003, lightning struck and I penned my first original story... 
It began with just sitting down one day and writing what would become this story's prologue. I imagined something fantastic, involving good vs. evil, magic, the elements, and reincarnation. And in the main story, my character Jonas would learn about this previous life and history repeats itself where he has to fulfill this destiny all over again.

What I'm about to attach started out as a 1-page prologue. I later expanded it into maybe 2-3 pages in a later draft. A year ago, I rewrote it longhand in a notebook. I typed it up on my laptop over the past month when I decided I'd make this the theme of my pumpkin this year.
I'll go into various revelations in a later past because lots of interesting changes happened as I was first writing it and even in the rewrites... 

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In the heavens, there lived a legion of angels. This race of divine beings was created for one sole purpose: safeguarding humanity. Invisible to mortal eyes, they were directed by their creator to lend assistance where they were most needed.

Among them was a group of six endowed with the greatest responsibility of all. They were each assigned an element of nature according to their unique dispositions.  

However, for the final angel called to the grand altar, the large white room at the center of the complex, his situation was different. His power would reveal itself in time and that one day, it will become the most important. Jonaseriah accepted this graciously without question. His love for humanity was the greatest of any angel. The opportunity to be of extra help to them, whatever form it took, he considered a great honor. While he waited for his time to come, he looked just as forward to the destiny awaiting all angels: becoming human.

The same could not be said about Nightariel, however. As the guardian of fire, he had witnessed the most destruction among his brethren and came to one conclusion. Humanity was doomed to destroy itself and he did not relish the notion of losing his impending mortal life to such foolishness. When he decided something had to change, Jonaseriah felt a twinge deep in his chest and he knew without further indication something bad was about to happen that would impact them all.

While the other angels fulfilled their duties as individuals, it was not uncommon for various members of this sextet to be summoned to the same location. One day, the moment arose when five of the six came together. A small desert town was receiving its first bout of rain in several months and the resulting storm was quickly escalating to frightening proportions.

All angels, by rule, could not set foot on Earth. If they did, their wings would disintegrate and they would be unable to return to the heavens. Because of this and the fact their work constituted a heavier burden, each of the element guardians acted through the familiars they created. These entities were also invisible to mortal eyes. Depending on the century and beliefs in place, they changed form. During the current era, wind, water and thunder acted through pegasuses and the destructive powers of fire and lightning acted through dragons.

Nathaniel of Wind and Rebecca of Water took charge straight away. They brought as much of their being to the site as they deemed necessary to combat the long-term drought. But the system they created grew so powerful, Evelyn was compelled to deliver multiple bolts of lightning. The angels wielded their powers accordingly, but occasionally, they were compelled by their creator to act against instinct. Naturally when this phenomenon occurred, they were powerless to stop it.

Two more bolts struck the lone tree in the area and the dried brush surrounding it. A large crack of thunder rumbled when the golden pegasus reared and stomped its diamond-hard hooves on the ground. The only inhabitants in the immediate area lived in a ramshackle house situated under the tree. Its front door burst open and a family of six ran outside. They froze in panic, unsure what to make of these unfamiliar conditions. Evelyn delivered another bolt of lightning and to her horror, it struck and killed one of them instantly. The subsequent rumble of thunder caused the tree, which was rooted in weak soil to begin with, to topple over. Nightariel dealt the finished blow, causing it to burst into flames. The winds generated by Nathaniel’s Pegasus caused it to spread until it covered the entire plain. Rebecca’s torrential downpour eventually distinguished everything within the hour, leaving behind only ashes.  

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The grand altar’s interior resembled that of a typical Christian church, but favored minimalism over ornate decoration. A line of white marble pews ran on both sides of the aisle. At the front of the room was a stage, mere inches above the main floor, with a podium at its center. This space was for display only. The creator, by nature, was omnipresent and did not physically manifest on the same plain as any of his creations. On the rare occasions communication was given, it was always in his own unique way.

Although most angels only came to this room to depart for missions, Jonaseriah preferred it to his dwelling while his comrades were away. He would occupy the same pew at the front left corner of the room, close his eyes, and silently pray for their safe return. These exchanges were always one-sided, but it soothed his soul just the same.

He also found it reassuring to be there to greet them upon their return—especially on those days when not all went according to plan. At last, the large entry doors creaked open. He rose to his feet and stood at the end of the aisle as the others filed into the room. 

Tristan, the guardian of Thunder, and Rebecca shared sympathetic glances with him. Both nodded toward a dejected Evelyn, who was leaning on Nathaniel for support. A few paces behind Tristan and Rebecca, Nightariel looked back as well, but his eyes were void of any expression at all. But while the other two retired to their living quarters, Nightariel hid from sight in the right doorway to eavesdrop on the ensuing conversation.  

The three remaining angels had a seat at the front left corner of the room. Jonaseriah rubbed Evelyn’s arm a couple of times before wrapping both of his around her. “I’m so sorry you had to go through that.”

She choked back her tears. “I couldn’t stop myself… this has happened before, but never so many people. Never children.” Nathaniel leaned in to embrace her back. “We all have been compelled to act in ways we don’t agree with. It’s unfortunate, but it’s part of what we do.” They separated and sat solemnly for a moment.

Jonaseriah inhaled and averred with his hands folded on his knees, “The loss of any life is painful. I always wish there was some way I could help, but I can only trust in the will of our creator. There is a reason for all that occurs, for good and for bad.”

Nathaniel leaned forward, his eyebrows crooked as he asked, “Have you heard anything yet?”

Evelyn temporarily snapped out of her sorrow and adjusted her attention to Jonaseriah as well. His passive stance was easy enough for her to read. “You still haven’t been given a mission?”

He managed a hopeful smile, but gently shook his head. This glaring fact was no secret, but it was rarely mentioned in his presence. Jonaseriah understood everyone dealt with adversity in their own way and they were only trying to spare his feelings. As unshakeable as his faith was, sometimes this consideration had the opposite effect on him. So it gave him a lump in his throat whenever Nathaniel took the time to ask. Words could never hope to explain how grateful he was for the concern afforded to him.

All of the angels got along fairly well and relished in each other’s company. Tristan and Rebecca existed on the same wavelength in body and in mind despite the fact their powers weren’t often required for the same missions—unless of course a thunderstorm was involved. It was extremely rare for anyone to have a conversation with one without the other being close by.

While Jonaseriah spent much of his time at the grand altar during missions and afterwards, Nightariel was the exact opposite. As soon as his missions were complete, he’d retire to his living quarters. For this reason, they were a mystery to each other. Jonaseriah knew fire was a difficult power to wield and he respected Nightariel’s ability. Yet they’d shared so few interactions with one another, he had no way of knowing if the respect was mutual or non-existent on the other side.

As for Nathaniel and Evelyn, Jonaseriah often thought of them as his two closest friends. He could tell them almost anything. Even if they had no advice for him, they were there to offer a sympathetic ear. With more time passing in silence, it soon occurred to him that he had to share his recent premonitions. It would be a difficult subject to broach, but the burden of keeping them to himself had begun to weigh too much on his soul. He also feared if he held onto them any longer, others would suffer the same anguish Evelyn was currently experiencing.

Keeping his gaze to the empty podium, he mentally asked for the strength to proceed. A soft warmth spread from the toes to the tips of his wings; he took it as a good sign. “The nature of my power remains a mystery, but since the beginning, I was promised that my destiny would reveal itself at the right time. I have no immediate proof of this, but intuition tells me it will be soon.”

“What makes you say that?” Nathaniel inquired.  

“There’s an uneasiness I’ve been feeling for weeks that I can’t seem to shake. Then today, there was something new.” He lifted his shroud. Both leaned for a closer look and gasped. Just below his heart, his skin was glowing a purplish-red. “I felt an impact deep inside and I saw this glow radiate from my chest. It was a lot redder before. I think it will go away eventually.” He let it drop and he straightened himself out.

After everything had time to sink in, Evelyn ground her teeth and her hands clenched. Her voice cracked every other word. “So you knew this was going to happen? Why didn’t you say anything?”

The warmth Jonaseriah gained through prayer helped him maintain a sense of calm, but all he could do was state the facts as he saw them.  “It wouldn’t have made a difference. You still had to go. The vegetation in that desert needed water.”

Fury raged through Evelyn’s entire body. The shaking got to be so bad that she leapt to her feet. It was evident from the distance in her eyes, no doubt reliving the recent horror, common sense wasn’t going to reach her. “Six people are dead. Spare me your excuses.” With a quick flip of her dark shoulder-length hair, she stormed off.

His borrowed strength now diminished, Jonaseriah buried his face in his hands. “I should not have chosen this moment to show candor. Those wounds are still fresh in her heart and will remain for quite some time.”

Nathaniel patted his shoulder a couple of times before letting it rest there. He felt just as defeated and helpless to assist her. “I know you only wanted to help.”

The glowing faded away, freeing Jonaseriah to breathe deeply again. “Unfortunately, she left before I could finish. That bad feeling—more people will be involved. A lot more. We need to be prepared for anything.”

The powers of the elements were unavailable to the angels beyond their duties on Earth but certain aspects of these affinities remained with them through the course of their day-to-day lives. Evelyn had always been emotional and she sometimes had difficulty controlling her temper. As he sat with Jonaseriah and heeded his words, Nathaniel felt the atmospheric pressure in the room transform. His comrade spoke the truth and the gravity of it was palpable.

Unsure at first how to proceed, the right words eventually found him. “Do you want me to tell the others?”

“Not yet. But if you can, when the worst becomes apparent, take the lead. I will join you when I possibly can.”

“I will.” They took hold of each other’s forearms and had a moment of prayer for the fallen.

As Evelyn stomped down the corridor, a deep voice reached out to her. “They cannot begin to understand.”

“Who’s there?” She spun around. Nightariel stepped out of the shadows into the hallway. His slick smile didn’t reach his cold eyes. “Nightariel,” she said with resignation. “I’m not really in the mood for company right now.”

His cape floated mere inches above the floor as he faced her directly. “Forgive my intrusion, Evelyn. I only waited here in case you needed my help. This burden must be so difficult for you to handle on your own. The others—they have not had to take a life as we have. Nothing weighs on their conscious.”

“How can you know that?” She recoiled. So much pain and uncertainty had been thrown at her so fast. She wasn’t ready for another bombshell. “They receive different assignments than us. This is only the fifth time the five of us had been summoned to the same scene.”

“Occasionally, I will go with the others.” He shrugged, but maintained his pragmatic demeanor.  “It’s rare, of course.”

“Then why is it harder for me than it is for them? Am I weak?”

“No, Evelyn.” He reassured her with a firm hand on her shoulder. “You are not weak. They do not see the results of their actions as we do. Our approach is more direct.”

All of Evelyn’s reservations and insecurities vanished in mere seconds. Her nerves, afire since she returned to the complex, were finally able to cool down. Whether the reassurance she felt was the result of this much needed conversation or Nightariel utilizing one of his abilities, it was hard to be sure. She considered the similarities of their powers, particularly their tendency towards destruction, and wondered why it never occurred to her before. Her interactions with Nightariel had been few, but he appeared to be reaching out as an ally. Other than the lives she took, the worst part of the experience was the isolation and she never wanted to feel that way again.

After he dropped his hand, she asked about something else pressing on her mind. “Have you had your power taken too? Were you ever compelled to act against your wishes?”

“Frequently. But it is the will of our creator.” He flashed his eyebrows, dark humor coloring his tone.

This didn’t register with Evelyn, but the familiar phrase certainly did. “Jonaseriah said that too. How can he have so much faith? We have been doing this for centuries and he has yet to see battle.”

He could only shrug and offer another sardonic remark. “Who knows? We were given power that suit us best. Perhaps his is patience.”

“Well, what I do know—I am not doing that again. I don’t want any more blood on my hands. But what can I do?”

After a long pause, Nightariel suggested, “I may have an idea. I have a theory I have been working on for a while. If I am going to test it out, I will need some help.”

She groaned and rolled her eyes. “Not you too! Where were these hunches and ideas before…?” Frustrated, she knelt to the ground and hugged her knees.

Nightariel came down to her level and braced her shoulders. “No mortal will die by your hand again. You have my word. Meet me here tomorrow. And we can figure it out together.”

*           *           *

 

When angels are summoned by their creator to lend their assistance on Earth, they proceed to the grand altar where gateways to their destinations materialize. But these portals are only open for a short time before vanishing. Should additional aid be needed, the gates to the heavens remained open as long as one angel was away on a mission. For the angels possessing the elements, it was customary for all of them to enter the grand altar together to see off the individuals chosen for missions.   

The day following the storm in the desert, Rebecca and Tristian, along with Nathaniel, were being summoned to remedy a mudslide situation elsewhere. Nightariel and Evelyn stood on the opposite side of the room, their eyes also on the right corridor archway. Moments later, Nathaniel entered alone with a shrug.

“Is everything all right, Nathaniel?” Rebecca came forward, taking his forearms in hers.

Tristan stood close behind, his hand on her shoulder. “Yes, you’re usually the first one here. We were worried the portal would close and you would have to catch up to us.”

“Actually,” Nightariel interceded, “the portals remain open until all of the members of the party have gone through.”

“Right. Thank you, Nightariel,” Tristan nodded to him. “Yesterday was so crazy. It’s easy to forget the most obvious things.”

“Wait,” Evelyn crossed the room, still staring at the archway, “where is Jonaseriah? Isn’t he coming?”

Nathaniel replied, “He’s fine. He just has a lot on his mind right now, that’s all.”

“Oh…” Her eyes dropped to her feet.

“It’s all right, Evelyn.” Rebecca smiled. “Sometimes we all just need a little time on our own. I can’t imagine it’s easy for him, joining us here and getting left out of the fight.”

“Come on,” Tristan urged her with the stroke of her arm, “we need to go.” One after the other, they phased through the portal. Nathaniel shared a sympathetic glance with Evelyn before departing as well.

After the gateway disappeared, Nightariel called Evelyn out of her mental tangles. “This way.” She trailed a few feet behind him as they went through the entrance and stopped just beyond the gates. In the far distance to the west, three colored lights broke through the clouds: white, gold and blue. Evelyn beamed towards her friends and folded her hands to pray for their good fortune. Nightariel’s attention, meanwhile, was to the farthest east where no halos were in sight.

“Follow me,” he said as he took off in the direction of his gaze. Both of their familiars materialized once they entered Earth’s atmosphere.

Evelyn flew in her typical zigzag pattern to keep close behind. “Where are we going?”

“To a place no angel has ever been needed.”

A massive snow-capped mountain, crested by a fine mist, peaked miles above the large village at its foundation. The surrounding greenery was lush with an almost celestial glow. Evelyn’s mouth hung open as she looked all around her. “It’s beautiful. Only the Garden of Eden surpasses it.”

He regarded the region with equal disbelief, not out of reverence, but bewilderment. “With so much discord in the world, it has confounded me for centuries why no disaster has ever struck this place.”

Waves of dread shuddered through her, deflating her buoyant mood instantly. Her mind flashed back to that final bolt of lightning yesterday and all of the havoc it created. “Do you think it will? Are we here to prevent an oncoming disaster?”

“To prevent further disaster everywhere.” He faced her, raising an eyebrow. “Do you trust me?”

“Yes.” She answered with immense eagerness. She wanted nothing more than a chance at redemption, an absolution from all of her guilt.

“Then let’s save humanity together.” He took her hands and a tremendous shock ran through her entire body. The most earth shuttering scream followed.

For Nightariel, the surge of energy coursing through him was invigorating beyond anything he could have imagined. Beams of lightning and fire came together in his hand and transformed into a staff. Admiring his new weapon, he aimed the orb at its tip toward the mountaintop and blew it open. He let go of Evelyn and waved his arms over his head, willing fire to erupt from the site of the explosion. The resulting debris engulfed the denizens and village below.

Evelyn, now unconscious, plummeted toward Earth. Her familiar followed close, but arrived too late to keep her from reaching the ground. Nightariel and his familiar were side by side as they landed. A lesser shock made him shudder to his knees. His wings caught fire, quickly distinguishing, leaving behind a skeletal outline. “This suits me fine. I never planned to go back.” He drew a sly eye upward.

“Traitor…” Evelyn coughed as she awoke. Try as she might, she couldn’t rise off the ground. Her wings were still intact, but she was pinned under the weight they gained from Earth’s gravity. Her familiar was still as stone beside her, unable to move.

Nightariel observed his staff in wonder. The orb, which glowed as red as Jupiter’s red spot, had an electrical field encircling it. “I broke no promises. My staff caused this, not you.”

“What about saving humanity? You lied to me!”

“I am saving them—from themselves.” His devious grin grew and his voice less sympathetic.

“What?” She stammered.

“It is inevitable. They war over the pettiest things. In my work, I have seen nothing less than foolishness over and over again. I will not be doomed to become like them. So I will create a new world in my image. Free from war. And thanks to your power, I have another way to ensure their destruction.” Weakly, she raised her hands toward him and reached inside her soul. Except nothing came out, not even a spark. “This will ensure you have no further responsibility for human life. You should be thanking me.”

“Never…” Her voice dropped below a whisper, her strength quickly leaving her.

*           *           *

 

After yesterday’s confession caused Evelyn so much distress, Jonaseriah thought giving her some space was the right thing to do. Nathaniel tried his hardest to convince him otherwise before departing, but ultimately left unsuccessful. As the hours ticked away, more regrets began to set in.

Through his entire existence, there wasn’t a single mission he hadn’t escorted his comrades to. Choosing isolation, despite always being left on his own, somehow felt wrong. The creator was always with him, but Jonaseriah felt closer to him in the grand altar. He loved to see the grateful smiles on his friends’ faces when they found him waiting for them. And even though his attempt to assuage Evelyn’s grief hadn’t gone as planned, being readily available to offer encourage or condolences was a fulfilling role.

He’d just entered the great room when a rippling pain brought him to his knees. He cradled his chest with his right arm. A brilliant purple-red light blinded him through clenched eyelids. His breath staggered as he struggled to remain conscious. Without any prompting, he knew the cause.  

“Jonaseriah!” Two voices called out to him through his haze. He managed to open his eyes as Rebecca and Tristan helped him onto the nearest pew.

Rebecca rubbed his back between the shoulder blades where the wings emerged. Tristan implored, “What happened?”

His face had paled so much, his pale blue eyes were almost glowing. “So many people crying out in terror. So much pain. Nightariel—he has betrayed our cause.” Both faced each other, mirroring wary gazes. The sharpest part of the pain had gone, but a numbness lingered in its place. The colorful light subsided as well, but remained as a rotating spiral spinning clockwise through his chest. “So this is my power? Feeling the pain of others?”

“There is more.” A deep voice commanded. Jonaseriah straightened himself in his seat, the numbness easier to bear. The other two did as well. Jonaseriah took notice of their equally attentive stances, astounded. The creator, when addressing his kin, did so through telepathy. This was the first time multiple angels were addressed at once. “Pure heart is the result of your love for humanity and all living beings. You feel their suffering, yes, but you have the ability to heal and extinguish the darkness and doubt in others.”

Nothing more was said and everyone relaxed their positions. They regarded each other with wide eyes, knowing they’d shared the most extraordinary experience. But the astonishment was short lived when Jonaseriah remembered three angels had left on a mission. “Where is Nathaniel?”

Rebecca explained, “When we were ascending just now, he saw something unusual in the distance and instructed us to get you.”

“Did he say what he saw?”

Tristan took over. “He saw a red light burning through the clouds. It was faint, but there was a yellow light as well.”

“Evelyn,” Jonaseriah gasped, leaping to his feet.

“Are you strong enough?” Rebecca braced his shoulder, her face riddled with concern.

“I am fine. Somehow, deep down, I knew something of this magnitude was upon us. Nathaniel was privy to my theory and offered to investigate on my behalf. I apologize I did not tell you as well.”

“There is nothing to forgive, Jonaseriah,” Tristan reassured him, “we must lend our assistance however we can.”

Suddenly, a new portal appeared before them. Unlike its predecessors, which presented a clear view of the predicament in need of resolution, the image within was obscured with an eerie electrified fog. The time for words had passed. One by one, the angels passed through and it instantaneously vanished behind them.  

*           *           *

 

The fire had extinguished, leaving no sign the idyllic paradise ever existed. Where the majestic mountain once stood, a crater equally as wide and deep had taken its place. The village was in ashes and its population completely decimated.

Nightariel marveled at his work, consumed with spiteful satisfaction. “I never realized the true beauty of nothingness until now.”

The combination of his casual demeanor and wry humor set Nightariel apart from the other angels. There was an interesting unpredictability about him that caught the others off guard one moment and by the next, they felt at ease in his presence. Having witnessed his true colors emerge, Evelyn could only wonder how much of his personality had been an act and for how long. She only knew everything had changed and there was no going back.

“You will never get away with this.” She gasped. Numbness had seized her entire body, but through sheer force of will, her fight for survival continued.

“Still here, are you?” He raised an eyebrow, amusement peaking in his voice.

“Why not kill me? It was so easy with those humans. What is stopping you from doing the same to me? I am of no further use to you.”

“Perhaps you are right. After all, we are destined to become human. Lightning should be equally as deadly to our kind.” He turned his attention to her familiar. The large yellow dragon had yet to move since his master crashed down to Earth. “Kill her,” Nightariel snapped his fingers, anticipating immediate obedience. Instead, there was no response. “I am your master now. Do as I say!” He spun his staff in defiance, its orb engulfed in a blazing red fury.

“It is not so easy, Nightariel!” The wind shifted, blowing in response to the new presence on the scene.

Nightariel flinched, caught off guard by the intrusion. Once he turned his attention upward, however, he regained his composure in an instant. With a smirk, he scoffed, “I should have known you would be coming.”

Astride his familiar, Nathaniel dashed towards the disturbance. Across what felt like the greatest distance he’d traversed in his existence, he looked from the traitor to Evelyn and back again. His golden eyes were liquid as despair and anger brewed inside him. The pure white Pegasus neighed and snorted with just as much fervor as her master.

Once in range, Nathaniel dismounted. His familiar neighed again with increasing agitation. “Patience, my friend.” He stroked her neck to soothe her. “We’ll be dealing with him soon enough.” She reluctantly agreed. Hovering a couple of yards away, Nathaniel circled back to his initial point. “You may have stolen Evelyn’s power, but familiars are eternally faithful to their creators.”

 “Fortuitous timing, Natheniel.” He retorted, “You are about to witness the creation of my new world, free of selfish and foolish humanity.”

Nathaniel floated down until his feet were a foot above the ground. He narrowed his eyes, repulsed by the insinuation. “The only selfish one I see here is you, Nightariel.” His wings spread wide, forming a protective shield between him and Evelyn. Alongside his familiar, they wafted their wings in unison, the resulting gust knocking Nightariel off his feet. The remnants of his wings opened best as they could, strong enough only to keep him from falling backward.

 “That will take some getting used to,” Nightariel hissed as pain radiated from his shoulder blades. But this was only a minor inconvenience. After dusting himself off, he was back on the attack. “So be it.” He raised his staff over his head with both hands, the electrified orb seething a burning red. Then, out of nowhere, a thunderous neigh broke his concentration. The power from the staff faded; Nightariel jammed it into the ground to stabilize himself as a tremor shuddered under his feet. A second neigh joined thunder. Neither the incoming angels rode their familiars as Nathaniel had, but it was clear from their penetrating glares how livid they were about Nightariel’s betrayal.  Despite the interruption, his confidence didn’t waver. “Rebecca and Tristan, I knew it was only a matter of time. But as usual, Jonaseriah…”

He was stopped short when Evelyn cried out, “Look!”

Everyone in the vicinity obeyed and their jaws dropped within seconds of each other. Their eyes were met with a brilliant sunset. The cumulus clouds glowed red, pairing beautifully with the lavender tint of the sky. Thousands of cherry blossoms floated precariously above their heads, almost dancing in the light breeze. The fog that had blanketed the area since the eruption slowly dissipated and the anger inside Nightariel boiled over. Despite his efforts, one patch of land on the other side of the deceased mountain, across the field from where they were all gathered, remained untouched. The grass glowed as if it possessed its own halo. And the offending cherry tree blossomed with equal brilliance. Standing in front of it was Jonaseriah.

Despite his feet being firmly planted on the ground, his wings had suffered no damage at all. In fact, they spread more brilliantly than any of the others had. More than anything else, this fact was what infuriated Nightariel the most. Vocalizing an adequate response became impossible, leaving him no alternative but to rethink his strategy in silence.

Even if given the opportunity, Jonaseriah wouldn’t have known where to begin explaining these extraordinary circumstances. He had crossed through the portal with Tristan and Rebecca, but once they passed through, he knew in an instant how all of the pieces were going to line up. After asking the others to join Nathaniel, he took off in the opposite direction. Through the fog, a plot of land seemed to call out to him. The rule that angels could not touch the ground was fresh in his mind after witnessing what became of Nightariel and Evelyn. However, as he drew closer, his gut told him he would be the one exception to that rule. The moment he touched down, a single cherry tree sprouted out of the ashes. The ground surrounding it purified as it went into full bloom. The creator spoke no clear instructions to him, but in his heart, Jonaseriah knew everything was happening exactly as it was destined to. It was now his responsibility to see it through to the end.

Once the shock wore off, Rebecca and Tristan nodded to each another. They crossed to the other side of the field, but flew several feet above the ground with an abundance of caution. Their familiars, meanwhile, flanked their comrade with renewed purpose and reverence. Nathaniel gave his familiar the same instruction and it joined the others without hesitation.

Through gnashed teeth, Nightariel proclaimed, “I see the line has been drawn. So, you were created just to defeat me? That is your noble purpose?”

Jonaseriah shrugged, finding himself at a loss. “I had hoped we could be reasonable, Nightariel, but it seems we are at an impasse. What you have done to humanity is unforgivable. It has gone on far too long now.”

“What?” Evelyn whispered. She mustered enough strength to reach her familiar and used it as a crutch to climb to her feet. Nathaniel turned to lend her further assistance, but she waved him away. “Don’t worry about me. Go over and join the others.” He patted her shoulder and obeyed, aligning himself with Rebecca and Tristan.

Facing her directly, Jonaseriah wanted nothing more than to apologize to Evelyn and help her. But there were more pressing matters he had to address first. He could only incline his head with a sympathetic smile before resuming eye contact with the enemy. “Nightariel has been acting on his own for a while now. Isn’t that right? I see your heart and it is black as night. That is something that takes dedication. It does not happen overnight.”

Sizing him up and doing his own calculations, Nightariel jested, “But how will you fight me? I see no familiar, no weapon. You have nothing!”

“How blind you have become…” He kept one eye on Nightariel as he turned his attention to the three pegasuses behind him. They huddled their heads together until their horns touched. With a brilliant blinding glow, they came undone and fused together into a spiraling sword. Its hilt was adorned with rubies and the sword itself existed in a spiral of three colors: blue, white, and gold.

“Our powers are at your will, master.” The three pegasuses bowed their front legs as a show of respect.

“I am intrigued,” Nightariel contemplated. “You claim to be different than me. Yet you also take power from others to add to your own.”

“You are wrong again. Your actions against Evelyn were criminal. You deceived her into joining your cause. Then you stripped her of her powers and used them against her wishes. In our case, we are all on the same wavelength. We share a common goal and I will serve as the channel to accomplish that goal.” He knelt down to touch the ground. With a rumble, a strip of land arose from the ashes. It solidified into a bridge, joining the two sides separated by the chasm. Vegetation spread as far across as it could, but stopped short of reaching Nightariel. Dark wisps of smoke extended from his feet, causing the new grass up to the midpoint of the bridge to decay.

 “There is one thing I need clarified.” Nightariel shook his head, willing himself to hold his temper until he can make sense of the situation. “How can they follow you so blindly? An angel who never descended from the heavens? An angel who has never seen battle? How are you any more trustworthy than I am?”

“What you say is true, but there is one point missing in your assessment. I have been able for some time to see the consciences of others. And I have been able to reach everyone’s apart from yours. Angels, when they enter battle together, have the means of coordinating their efforts by instinct. You have closed yourself off to everyone else, even turned your back on our creator. That is why you have been free to act on your own.” Finding himself at the end of his speech, it was now time to act. Jonaseriah took his stance, brandishing his sword.

“Very well.” Nightariel nodded, just as eager to begin. “If this goes badly, remember, you brought this on yourself. You all had a seat in my new kingdom, but to use your words, we are at an impasse.” He leveled his staff, waving his hand over the base. It transformed into a jagged dagger with the ability to emit electricity.

Both combatants rushed forward. Jonaseriah received a speed boost from his wings and their weapons met in the middle. They clashed back and forth, testing each other’s strength. Nightariel stepped back into his territory and Jonaseriah followed. When his feet touched the edge, an unpleasant surge ran through him and his wings quickly propelled him backwards until his feet rested on neutral ground. He called water to his aid to flood the plain and the grass started to regrow. But lightning came through the ground where Nightariel aimed his staff, undoing everything. Thunder, thanks to a tremor sent by that familiar’s front hooves, shook lightning’s hold and Jonaseriah tried wind to throw Nightariel off balance.

But it failed. He dug in his heels and immediately began his counterstrike. “I am not so foolish to fall for that twice.” He spun his staff in circles, steadily generating electricity and threw a bolt at Jonaseriah.

He promptly crossed his arms over his chest. His sword-wielding hand was on the outside, the weapon pointed to the sky to redirect the attack. His wings spread open to help him cushion the blow and maintain his balance. After the dust cleared, a bright purple-red light enveloped him. The gems on the hilt were aglow, but the brightest light came from his chest. Where his heart would be, a ruby shining in a kaleidoscope of reds and purples was in its place.

Nightariel panted to catch his breath. “We are at another impasse. Our creator was clever, assuring neither of us could wound the other. Even the elements are unable to rival one another.”

During the pause in action, Jonaseriah turned his attention to the crimson dragon at Nightariel’s flank. His master had yet to give it any orders. It was curious. Had its power been properly utilized, the struggle wouldn’t have been as even. He wasn’t sure if this oversight was a result of Nightariel’s arrogance or he was simply blinded by anger because his original plan hadn’t gone as smoothly as anticipated. Whatever the case was, the dragon didn’t appear to mind being ignored. Perhaps, it too was just waiting to be called into action.

“I never wanted this to be a fight.” Jonaseriah relaxed his position, lowering his sword. “I understand your perspective. Humanity has done its share of damage to this world and each other, but they have done amazing things too. And as they advance as a species, they will bring along more great change.”

“Yes, but also greater methods of destruction. Nothing you say will change anything.” Like an agitated snake, Nightariel lunged forward. His wings opened as wide as possible, accelerating his speed, and he drove the jagged end of his staff into the ruby crystal, cleaving it down the middle.

“Jonaseriah!” Nathaniel and their allies cried out, the pegasuses all rearing and neighing in unison. He exhaled with a groan. The wind had been knocked out of him and his mind raced to make sense of what had just happened. All he could manage was to keep a firm grip on his sword.

“It ends now!” Nightariel sneered, triumphant. But as he concentrated to muster lightning, nothing happened. “What?” Then he felt a tug at his cape on the ground. He turned around and found Evelyn clutching his ankles. A glint of yellow caught Jonaseriah’s eye; her familiar was close behind. A smile crept across his face as he understood her plan.

“I am taking my power back!” She cried out as she drew the current into her body and steadily transferred it back to her familiar. Its mouth opened as a swirling ball of electricity grew bigger inside it.

Now seeing an opening, Jonaseriah thrust his blade into Nightariel’s heart. “Radial Saber Extradition!” Wincing with pain from his wound, Jonaseriah poured all of his energy into his attack. The resulting prism of light, in conjunction with Evelyn’s efforts, enveloped the entire island and a tremendous explosion followed.

When the smoke cleared, every trace of Nightariel was gone along with half of the ruby crystal in Jonaseriah’s chest. He fell down to one knee and the others quickly surrounded him. “I am fine—just tired.” He caught his breath and assessed the area. The darkness on Nightariel’s side of the field had spread. Only the cherry tree remained untouched.  Addressing everyone around him with individual glances, he was overcome with gratitude. “Thank you for lending me your strength. I couldn’t have done this without your help.” Pegasuses, dragon and angels all nodded, beaming with equal appreciation. Then he realized someone else was missing and gasped, “Where is Nathaniel?”

Tristan and Rebecca braced each of his shoulders to lend immediate reassurance. Rebecca answered his query. “Once he saw that you survived the battle, he took off on his familiar to survey any possible damage to the region. In case our assistance is needed elsewhere.”
            “That’s good to hear. He’s been an invaluable ally and friend.” He smiled and the others nodded in agreement. “Wind is also the swiftest of the elements and time is of the essence right now.”

Nathaniel returned a few moments later. Compared to his countenance before the duel, he was more relaxed. The relief in his eyes carried over to the others in a matter of seconds. “I checked the entire archipelago. The other islands suffered no impact. Life is carrying on as if nothing happened.”

 “Good work, Nathaniel. Now, I must get to my own work.” Jonaseriah tried to stand, but he cringed and fell back down. His wings shielded him for protection as he panted from his knees.

Nathaniel, seeing Rebecca and Tristan already at his backside, meet with him face to face. “Tell us what you need done while you rest. We can handle it.”

“Thank you. Wind and water need to restore the weather pattern back to rain.” Following the signals of their masters, the white and gray pegasuses disappeared into the clouds. The breeze picked up speed and the beautiful colors in the sky gave way to various shades of gray.

“I want to help. What can I do?” Evelyn was still relying on her familiar for support, but the color in her face continued to improve. Between this and Nathaniel’s reconnaissance, the burden weighing on Jonaseriah’s conscience had all but vanished. He felt so fortunate that Nightariel’s action had brought no further harm to his friends and allies. This filled him with enough strength to rise to one knee.

He replied, “Come together with thunder to create a storm, but allow it to last only to the dawn.”

“Right away.” She nodded to her familiar, who departed with the golden Pegasus to join the others. Nathaniel, Tristan and Rebecca also left to carry out their assignments.  

“Please,” Jonaseriah turned to Evelyn, “help me to my feet.” She offered him a hand and lifted him up. As she wrapped his arm around her shoulders, his power extended to her wings. Not only did they grow lighter, but all of the damage that had been reversed. After the first rumble, he added, “We’ll need some shade from the storm.”

“What if the lightning hits the tree?”

She began to panic, her heart rate quickening, but he dismissed her concerns. “It won’t. The tree will be protected by a barrier as long as I breathe.”

“Is it your familiar?” Finally getting the chance to view it properly, she gasped at its radiance. The blossoms glowed in every shade of pink imaginable and the rain only enhanced their beauty.

“I am not sure if that is the proper term, but I had a vision of it when I entered Earth’s atmosphere and it came into being soon after.”

As they made the slow walk through the rain, the land began to renew, starting from where Jonaseriah’s feet touched the ground. The two of them leaned against the trunk of the tree and stayed dry as the raindrops fell around them. After another flash and rumble, Evelyn observed, “That was a good idea. Partnering lightning and thunder. If there was thunder, maybe it could save more lives from lightning strikes. Was it true what you said earlier—about mankind doing more amazing things?”

“I have no doubt. They have already learned how to harness fire, but may not be experts at managing it. If they did the same with lightning, it could be a more stable source of light for their homes.”

“Wow. And I never thought lightning could be anything but destructive.”

“All of the elements are capable of good and bad. That much I’ve learned from talking with the others about their work. It’s the same with humanity. Unfortunately, that was something Nightariel was never going to understand. He only experienced them at their worst, so it would be difficult for him to see them as anything else.”

She sighed, “I wish I had never believed him. Then none of this would have happened.”

He rubbed her back. “We cannot change the past, Evelyn. We can only learn from our mistakes to make the future a better place.”

Her mind started to spiral through all of the what-ifs but the close proximity with Jonaseriah extinguished those doubts one by one. This freed her mind to focus on the bigger picture. “You’re right. If this was his plan all along, I’m sure he would have find some way to make it happen. And I’m really glad you finally found your calling and were able to join us.”

“That makes two of us. It’s unfortunate it had to be under these circumstances, but no matter what my purpose was going to be, I was ready to accept it.”

The thunderstorm subsided the following morning. The surrounding land had been restored to its former glory. As the sun rose, an iridescent rainbow streaked across the sky. One by one, the angels and their familiars returned and he congratulated every one of them. “Well done, everyone. Thank you.”

“There is no sign of darkness anywhere.” Nathaniel said. “No trace of Nightariel.”

“What of his familiar?”

“That’s right,” Evelyn recollected, “I don’t recall it even participating in the fight.”

Jonaseriah clarified with a shrug, “Nightariel never called on its power and I found that very strange. Especially since it was the only ally he had at his disposal.”

Nathaniel elaborated, “I saw it leave the area just before the rain started coming down. Its expression was difficult to read, but if its speed was any indication, it had a destination in mind far away from here. Apparently what I told Nightariel still holds true: familiars are eternally faithful to their masters.”

“You make a compelling point. I anticipate when the dragon reappears, so will Nightariel and we must be prepared for whenever that time comes.” Everyone nodded in agreement.

Jonaseriah stood up. He took a few steps away from the tree when another wave of weakness washed over him. He groaned, clutching his chest. His wings spread to provide stabilize as his knees threatened to buckle. “Something’s wrong.” There wasn’t a hint of a question in her voice. Deep down, Evelyn knew something had been wrong for a while. She rushed to his side and braced his shoulder. The other angels exchanged nervous glances with one another before turning their attention back to him.

Between labored breaths, he gasped, “My time is nearing its end, I’m afraid. My heart, the love I have for humanity, it must remain here where it can do a lot of good for this world. I only hope I have enough purity of heart in my next life to counteract the darkness when Nightariel returns.” He knelt down. His hands, along with the rest of his body, shook as he placed them on the ground. As the ruby in his chest glowed and its vivid light dispersed across the surface of the ground, tears welled up in the eyes of his comrades. Once his noble duty was complete and the ruby vanished into thin air, Jonaseriah lost consciousness for the last time. Nathaniel and Evelyn reached to catch him before he fell. Rebecca and Tristan turned around and their hearts sank as the tree and all of its blossoms faded from existence.

Suddenly, as if by magic, he rose into the air and the others were summoned to join him. With heavy hearts, they conceded that the age of the angels had reached its end. They formed a circle around his body, grasping each other’s hands, and vowed to make their strength available to Jonaseriah when it came time to duel Nightariel again. Some passed their memories to their familiars and, generations from now, would act in their place as his allies. The others would become human with no memory of their former lives, but their paths were also destined to cross with Jonaseriah in the distant future. As for the angel of pure heart, his extraordinary story was just beginning.